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Title Ohtani Takes Next Step Throws First Bullpen Session at Spring Training

Shohei Ohtani's journey back to the pitching mound has taken a significant step forward with his first official bullpen session at Los Angeles Dodgers spring training in Arizona. The Japanese baseball sensation, who underwent elbow ligament surgery and subsequent shoulder surgery last season, is poised to return to both pitching and hitting duties for the Dodgers this year.

Ohtani's Progress

Manager Dave Roberts was impressed with Ohtani's performance, praising his delivery, command, and overall good ball movement. The ball was coming out really well, he said. I think Shohei seemed pretty pleased with it. This encouraging sign bodes well for Ohtani's chances of returning to the mound in May.

Ohtani's Role

While pitching is a crucial aspect of Ohtani's game, his hitting prowess will also be a vital component of the Dodgers' offense. As he continues to build up his pitches and pitch counts in training, Ohtani will remain a key figure in the team's batting lineup.

A Look Back at Ohtani's Historic Career

In his first six seasons with the Los Angeles Angels, Ohtani established himself as a two-way threat, excelling both on the mound and at the plate. His free agent deal with the Dodgers in December 2023, worth $700 million over 10 years, solidified his status as one of the most dominant players in MLB.

Conclusion

Shohei Ohtani's first bullpen session at spring training marks a crucial step towards his return to the pitching mound. As he continues to build up his pitches and intensity, fans can expect an exciting season ahead. Whether on the mound or at the plate, Ohtani will undoubtedly be a key factor in the Dodgers' success.

Key Takeaways

Shohei Ohtani threw his first official bullpen session at Los Angeles Dodgers spring training.
Manager Dave Roberts praised Ohtani's delivery and command.
Ohtani is expected to return to both pitching and hitting duties for the Dodgers this season.
His historic career includes being a two-way threat with the Los Angeles Angels.

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