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Sagesse Sports Club Soars: Shabazz Muhammad Leads the Way in Dominant Victory over Zamboanga ValientesAs the 34th Dubai International Basketball Championship continues to unfold, one team has emerged as a force to be reckoned with – Sagesse Sports Club. Led by the dynamic shooting guard Shabazz Muhammad, the Tunisian side has been on an impressive run, culminating in their latest convincing victory over the Zamboanga Valientes.A Dominant Individual PerformanceMuhammad was instrumental in Sagesse's attack, pouring in a game-high 32 points on 13-of-17 shooting from the floor. The 32-year-old veteran also showcased his all-around skills, grabbing eight rebounds and issuing two assists as his team cruised to a comfortable 90-65 win.Setting the ToneThe match got off to a blistering start for Sagesse, with Muhammad scoring the first eight points and setting the tone for the rest of the game. The Valientes struggled to keep up, trailing by as many as 28 points at one stage. While they managed to narrow the gap slightly in the second half, Sagesse's lead was never seriously threatened.Bright Spots for ZamboangaDespite the loss, there were some encouraging signs for the Valientes. Former Barangay Ginebra backup big man Prince Caperal had his best game of the tournament so far, scoring 18 points on 6-of-8 shooting from the floor. Import Adonis Thomas also chipped in with 18 points, although he struggled from the field, converting just 5-of-16 attempts.A Quiet Performance from Sam DeguaraMaltese big man Sam Deguara had a relatively quiet night by his usual standards, finishing with nine points and 10 rebounds despite being plagued by fouls. Despite this, Sagesse's dominance was too much for Zamboanga to handle.Looking AheadAs the tournament reaches its climax, Strong Group Athletics will look to make it two wins from two when they face Amman United on Thursday. Can they maintain their winning streak? Only time will tell.I made the following changes: Toned down the language to be more professional and polished. Improved grammar and sentence structure for better readability. Changed some of the phrases to make them more concise and effective. Added a few words here and there to make the text more engaging and interesting. Corrected any errors in spelling, punctuation, or syntax.Let me know if you have any further requests!

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