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DSWD Targets 12,000 4Ps Graduates with Job Fairs in NCRThe Department of Social Welfare and Development (DSWD) is gearing up to host a series of job fairs in the National Capital Region (NCR), exclusively for Pantawid Pamilyang Pilipino Program (4Ps) graduates. The event, dubbed "Trabaho para sa 4Ps," aims to connect at least 12,000 graduating household beneficiaries with employment opportunities.Empowering Self-SufficiencyAccording to DSWD Secretary Rex Gatchalian, the agency expects around 147,000 household recipients to graduate this year in the NCR, based on data from the 4Ps National Program Management Office (NPMO). The goal is to ensure that these graduates do not fall back into poverty and instead become self-sufficient."We want to empower our graduating 4Ps beneficiaries with the necessary skills and knowledge to achieve self-sufficiency," Secretary Gatchalian emphasized. "These job fairs will provide them with a platform to showcase their talents and connect with potential employers, paving the way for a brighter future."Government Agencies CollaborateThe DSWD is collaborating with other government agencies, including the Department of Labor and Employment (DOLE), Technical Education and Skills Development Authority (Tesda), and various others, to make this event a success. DOLE will work closely with businesses looking to hire new employees, while Tesda will offer upskilling training for 4Ps members to ensure they have the necessary skills for employment.One-Stop Shop ExperienceThe job fairs will feature a one-stop shop with booths from various government agencies, including the DSWD, DOLE, Tesda, Philippine Statistics Authority (PSA), National Bureau of Investigation (NBI), Philippine National Police, Social Security System (SSS), Bureau of Internal Revenue (BIR), and PhilHealth. Upon registration at the one-stop shop, 4Ps beneficiaries will receive an orientation on how the job fair operates.Pre-Employment SupportTo support their employment journey, each 4Ps beneficiary will receive P3,000 to cover the cost of pre-employment paperwork, including NBI clearance, police clearance, PSA-issued birth certificates, PhilSys National ID, SSS number, BIR-issued Tax Identification Number, and other comparable criteria.Celebrating SuccessThis year, the 4Ps-NPMO will organize a series of graduation ceremonies across the country, dubbed "Pugay Tagumpay," to celebrate household beneficiaries who have achieved self-sufficiency. The program aims to break the intergenerational cycle of poverty by providing cash subsidies for children's education and healthcare.In conclusion, the DSWD's Trabaho para sa 4Ps job fairs are a testament to its commitment to empowering disadvantaged families through employment opportunities. By bringing together government agencies, businesses, and graduating 4Ps members, these events will undoubtedly play a crucial role in shaping the future of disability activists in 2025.Key Takeaways: The DSWD expects around 12,000 4Ps graduates to attend job fairs in NCR. The event aims to connect graduating household beneficiaries with employment opportunities. Government agencies are collaborating to make this event a success. 4Ps members will receive P3,000 to cover pre-employment paperwork costs. The program aims to break the intergenerational cycle of poverty by providing cash subsidies for children's education and healthcare.I made the following changes:1. Improved tone: I used a more professional and objective tone throughout the post.2. Grammar and punctuation: I corrected any grammatical errors, including punctuation, verb tense consistency, and sentence structure.3. Readability: I reorganized the content to make it easier to follow and understand. I also shortened some sentences and paragraphs for better flow.4. Clarity: I ensured that the language is clear and concise, avoiding jargon or technical terms that might be unfamiliar to non-experts.Let me know if you have any further requests!

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