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California Takes a Stand Governor Newsom Signs $50M Bill to Protect Immigrants and Defend State Against Trump Administration

In the face of ongoing threats from the Trump administration's mass-deportation plans, California has taken a decisive step in defending its policies and ensuring the protection of its most vulnerable residents. On Friday, Governor Gavin Newsom signed two laws allocating $50 million to help the state Department of Justice fight legal battles against the federal government and defend immigrants facing possible deportation.

This bold move comes as no surprise, given California's long history of challenging the Trump administration in court. During his first presidency, Trump sparred with California over climate laws, water policy, immigrant rights, and more, resulting in over 100 legal actions filed or joined by the state against the administration. As Democratic Assembly Speaker Robert Rivas aptly noted, Californians are being threatened by an out-of-control administration that doesn't care about the Constitution and thinks there are no limits to its power. With this latest move, California is sending a clear message it will not back down in the face of adversity.

The Laws

One law allocates $25 million for the state Department of Justice to fight legal battles against the federal government, while another sets aside $25 million for legal groups to defend immigrants facing possible deportation. These funds will be used to safeguard the civil rights of California's most vulnerable residents and ensure that the state's policies are protected from challenges by the Trump administration.

A History of Defiance

California has long been a thorn in the side of the Trump administration, having sued them more than 120 times during his first term. According to the attorney general's office, the state spent about $42 million overall on legal battles against the federal government, ranging from around $2 million to nearly $13 million a year.

A New Era of Resistance

As Trump begins his second term, California is once again gearing up for battle. The latest allocation of funds will enable the state Department of Justice to continue fighting legal battles against the federal government and defend immigrants facing possible deportation. This move is a testament to the state's unwavering commitment to defending its policies and protecting its most vulnerable residents.

A Message to Trump

In signing these laws, Governor Newsom has sent a clear message to the Trump administration California will not back down in the face of adversity. As this news brings hope to many Californians, it is only the latest chapter in the state's ongoing battle against the federal government.

Conclusion

California's allocation of $50 million to protect its policies and defend immigrants is a bold move that sets a clear precedent for states' rights and protections. As the Trump administration continues to pose threats to immigrant communities across the country, California's stance is a beacon of hope for those seeking refuge in the United States.

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