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Title The Gallant Return South Korea's Yoon Faces Impeachment Hearing in Bid to Reverse Ouster

As the Constitutional Court of South Korea begins deliberations on the fate of President Yoon Seok Yeol, the ousted leader faces a potentially decisive impeachment hearing. Despite weeks of hearings, President Yoon has remained steadfast in his defiance, attributing his failed attempt to suspend civilian rule to malicious opposition.

The December attempt at martial law was swiftly voted down by the opposition-led parliament, leading to Yoon's impeachment and subsequent arrest on insurrection charges. This historic turn of events marks a first for South Korea, with President Yoon becoming the first sitting head of state to be detained.

As Yoon returns to court today, experts predict a unanimous ruling in favor of impeachment, paving the way for an election within 60 days to choose a new president. The question remains whether Yoon's declaration of martial law, reserved for national emergencies or times of war, violated the constitution.

Yoon's legal team argues that his declaration was an act of governance and thus not subject to judicial review. However, critics contend that this move was a blatant attempt to undermine democratic processes. Even if Yoon had ordered the arrest of MPs to prevent them from voting down his decree – which he did not – it would not legally matter since it was not carried out.

The hearing is set to hear evidence from the former chief of South Korea's intelligence service and one of the heads of Seoul's Capital Defence Command, the military unit dispatched to parliament during the short-lived martial law bid. The prosecution is expected to present a strong case against Yoon, with lawyers stating that the time is ripe for a constitutional assessment as they await the outcome of the impeachment trial.

As the court deliberates, experts warn that political wrangling could delay the trial – prominent conservative supporters of Yoon have called for additional hearings. An additional judge could also be approved to the Constitutional Court's nine-member bench, currently one member short.

If the court upholds the impeachment, it would mark a significant turning point in South Korea's political landscape. With much at stake, today's hearing marks a crucial moment in President Yoon's bid to reverse his ouster and reclaim the presidency.

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