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Title Miami Open Draper's Reality Check, Zverev Soars Ahead

The Miami Open has witnessed its share of surprises, with some players shining brightly while others have experienced a harsh awakening. One such player was Britain's Jack Draper, who had been riding high on his Indian Wells triumph only to crash back down to earth.

Draper's opening match at the Miami Open ended in defeat at the hands of 54th-ranked Czech Jakub Mensik, who rose to the occasion and secured a 7-6(7/2) 7-6(7/3) victory. The 19-year-old Mensik proved too strong for Draper, winning two tie-breaks and serving impeccably throughout the match.

It was tough, Draper acknowledged after the match. I struggled to adjust to the faster courts and couldn't get a read on his serve at all.

Meanwhile, top seed Alexander Zverev has been making waves at Miami Open. The German player eased into the third round with a convincing 6-2 6-4 win over Britain's Jacob Fearnley.

Zverev's title hopes have received a boost following the shock defeat of second-seed Carlos Alcaraz to Belgian veteran David Goffin. With Jannik Sinner out of the picture, Zverev is looking like the main challenger to Novak Djokovic on paper.

I'm generally happy with my level today, Zverev said, reflecting on his performance. In Indian Wells it was very different, so I hope I can continue playing this way and have a great week here.

Other upsets in the men's draw included 13th-seeded American Ben Shelton's defeat at the hands of wildcard Coleman Wong of Hong Kong. Wong battled his way to a 7-6(7/3) 2-6, 7-6(7/5) victory, despite letting slip a 5-2 lead in the final set.

On the women's side, top seed Aryna Sabalenka moved into the fourth round after her opponent Elena-Gabriela Ruse retired due to injury. Third-seed Coco Gauff also progressed with a 6-2, 6-4 win over Maria Sakkari.

In another women's match, Naomi Osaka emerged victorious from a closely contested battle against American wild card Hailey Baptiste.

As the tournament continues, it remains to be seen which players will maintain their winning streaks and which ones will experience a reality check.

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