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Weekend Brownouts Ahead Meralco Announces Power Interruptions in NCR, Rizal, Quezon, and Bulacan

As we continue to navigate the ever-changing landscape of 2025, it's crucial to stay informed about the latest developments from our power providers. Recently, Manila Electric Company (Meralco) announced that certain areas within the National Capital Region (NCR), Rizal, Quezon, and Bulacan will experience planned power interruptions this weekend.

Understanding the Brownouts

The planned maintenance works are aimed at ensuring a stable and reliable electricity supply for residents. In Metro Manila, some areas in Tondo will be affected on February 8, 2025 between 830 a.m. and 330 p.m., as Meralco installs, replaces, converts, and retires certain electricity facilities.

Affected Areas in NCR

The following areas in the National Capital Region (NCR) are expected to experience power outages

Pag-Asa and Pag-Asa Ext. Sts. from near Juan Luna St. to Peralta St. in Gagalangin;
Danganan St. from Javier St. to and including Mendoza, Adriano, R. Cruz, Taladtad, Pascua, Frilles, C. Santos, J. Cunanan, Fronda, Javier, Ramirez, and Tan Sts. in Gagalangin;
Hermosa St. from J. Cunanan St. to Mendoza St. in Gagalangin;
Sunog Apog, Gen. Lukban, Victoria, and Clemente Sts. near Pag-Asa St. in Gagalangin;
Rosalina St. from Pag-Asa St. to Benita St. in Gagalangin; and
Juan Luna St. from near Benita St. to and including Banal St. in Manuguit and Gagalangin.

Brownouts in Other Regions

In addition to the NCR, other areas will also experience power interruptions

Bulacan Some parts of Plaridel will be affected on February 9, 2025 between 10 a.m. and 2 p.m., as Meralco replaces an electricity pole.
+ A portion of Ma. Lourdes Drive from Sitio Libis to and including Manila Memorial Park;
+ Sta. Maria, Sta. Veronica, Sto. Rosario, Sta. Catalina, Sta. Isabel, Sta. Ignacia, and Sta. Ana Sts. in Ma. Lourdes Subd., Brgy. Tabang.
Quezon Some areas of Sariaya will experience power outages on February 8, 2025 between 10 a.m. and 1 p.m., as Meralco installs new electricity facilities.

Conclusion

As we adapt to the complexities of 2025, it's essential to stay informed about the latest updates from our power providers. By doing so, we can ensure a smooth transition during these planned maintenance works. Stay tuned for further updates!

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