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Title DOF Chief-Eyed Chairmanship of DBP A Boost for Economic Growth?

The Department of Finance (DOF) is poised to play a more active role in guiding the operations of the Development Bank of the Philippines (DBP), as proposed changes to the state-owned financial institution's charter take shape. The move aims to enhance the bank's financial stability and capacity to drive national progress, with Finance Secretary Ralph Recto set to assume the chairmanship once the proposed amendments become law.

A New Era for DBP Strengthening Governance

The proposed changes have passed third and final reading in both houses of Congress, marking a significant shift in the bank's governance structure. The current chairman, businessman Philip Lo, will be replaced by Recto, who has emphasized the need to strengthen the bank's mandate to support medium- and long-term needs of agricultural and industrial enterprises.

Enhanced Governance and Accountability A Fresh Perspective

The proposed amendments also introduce three independent directors and the secretary of the National Economic and Development Authority (NEDA) as an ex-officio member, further enhancing governance and accountability. This move aims to bring in fresh perspectives and expertise to support the bank's new mandate.

Supporting Government Initiatives Focus Areas

As chairman, Recto has outlined several key areas where DBP will focus its efforts, including

Investments in digital and physical infrastructure
Assistance for micro, small, and medium enterprises (MSMEs)
Funding for critical sectors such as education, health care, housing, social services, and environmental protection

Capital Raising and Expansion New Opportunities

The proposed amendments also authorize DBP to offer up to 30 percent of its shares to the public, providing an avenue for raising additional capital while ensuring that at least 70 percent of the bank's outstanding capital stock remains under government control. The bank's authorized capital stock will be significantly increased to P300 billion from P35 billion, enabling it to expand credit assistance and financial services to priority sectors.

Conclusion A Boost for Economic Growth

The proposed changes to DBP's charter aim to strengthen its role in supporting national progress and uplifting the lives of more Filipinos. With the DOF chief at the helm, the bank is poised to play a more significant role in driving economic growth, promoting financial inclusion, and implementing government policies on priority financing areas.

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