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Title Gaza Truce in Jeopardy Trump's Proposal Sparks Backlash and Raises Questions about the Future of Israel-Hamas Deal

The fragile truce between Israel and Hamas is under threat due to President Donald Trump's proposal for a US takeover of the Gaza Strip. The backlash sparked by his remarks has raised concerns about the future of the agreement, which was set to see another hostage-prisoner swap take place on Saturday.

The fifth swap, scheduled to exchange more hostages and prisoners, remains shrouded in uncertainty as both sides have yet to disclose the details of the deal. Amidst this uncertainty, a campaign group has urged Israel to stick with the truce, warning that any backtracking could leave a huge black stain on the history of our state.

The ceasefire agreement was mediated by Qatar, Egypt, and the United States and aims to secure the release of 33 hostages during its first 42-day phase. So far, Palestinian militants have freed 18 hostages in exchange for around 600 Palestinian prisoners released from Israeli jails.

However, Trump's proposal has sparked outrage across the Middle East and beyond. Hamas has rejected the plan as absolutely unacceptable, while Israel has ordered its military to prepare for the voluntary relocation of Gazans.

As tensions continue to escalate, it remains to be seen whether Israel and Hamas will stick to the deal or if Trump's proposal will derail the fragile truce. The fate of the hostages and prisoners hangs in the balance, leaving many wondering what the future holds for this volatile region.

Key Takeaways

President Donald Trump's proposal for a US takeover of the Gaza Strip has put the fragile truce between Israel and Hamas at risk.
The fifth hostage-prisoner swap is scheduled to take place on Saturday, but details are still unclear.
Both sides have expressed concerns about the future of the agreement, with Hamas rejecting Trump's plan as absolutely unacceptable.
Israel has ordered its military to prepare for the voluntary relocation of Gazans, sparking fears of a potential backlash.

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