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Protecting Filipino Seafarers TUCP Seeks Locsin's Help in UK Labor Deal

As a nation, we take great pride in our seafarers who bravely navigate the world's oceans to bring back vital resources. However, their contributions often go unnoticed, leaving them vulnerable to exploitation and abuse. To address this issue, the Transport Union Congress of the Philippines (TUCP) is pushing for a new bilateral labor agreement (BLA) with the United Kingdom (UK).

The Significance of Protecting Filipino Seafarers

For decades, Filipino seafarers have played a crucial role in the country's economy. They are essential to keeping global supply chains moving and transporting goods from one place to another. Unfortunately, their labor rights are often neglected, leaving them exposed to exploitation.

TUCP's Efforts Seeking Locsin's Support

To protect Filipino seafarers, TUCP is working closely with Foreign Affairs Secretary Teodoro Locsin Jr. to secure a new BLA with the UK. This agreement aims to improve wages, working conditions, and job security for Filipino seafarers.

The Power of Collaboration

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Key Takeaways

TUCP is pushing for a new BLA with the UK to protect Filipino seafarers from exploitation.
The agreement aims to improve wages, working conditions, and job security for Filipino seafarers.
Protecting our seafarers is crucial for maintaining global supply chains and keeping our economy strong.

Conclusion

As we strive to build a more just society, it's essential that we protect the rights of our seafarers. TUCP's efforts to secure a new BLA with the UK are a step in the right direction. By working together, we can create a safer and more prosperous future for all.

Keywords Bilateral Labor Agreement (BLA), Transport Union Congress of the Philippines (TUCP), Foreign Affairs Secretary Teodoro Locsin Jr., seafarers, exploitation.

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Edward Lance Arellano Lorilla

CEO / Co-Founder

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