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Title Munich Car Ramming Attack Dozens Injured in Suspected Terror Incident

The city of Munich was left shaken on Thursday after a car driven by an Afghan national plowed into a crowd, leaving at least 30 people injured. The incident has raised concerns about security and immigration ahead of Germany's federal election next week.

According to reports, the white Mini Cooper accelerated and slammed into individuals participating in a strike held by the Verdi public sector workers' union. One shot was fired at the suspect, but he was not hit.

The driver, identified as 24-year-old Farhad Noori, was detained by police, and his motive remains unclear. Bavaria state premier Markus Soeder described the incident as probably an attack.

The incident has sparked a heated debate about immigration and security issues in Germany, with conservative politicians calling for stricter measures to prevent similar attacks.

Conservative frontrunner Friedrich Merz emphasized that safety would be his top priority if he becomes Germany's next chancellor. We will enforce law and order. Everyone must feel safe in our country again. Something has to change in Germany, Merz posted on social media platform X.

The incident has also been seized upon by the far-right Alternative for Germany (AfD), with co-leader Alice Weidel focusing on the driver being an Afghan asylum seeker. Should this go on forever? Migration turnaround now! she posted on X.

Meanwhile, Chancellor Olaf Scholz emphasized that the perpetrator could not hope for leniency and must be punished and leave the country.

The incident has raised concerns about security ahead of the Munich Security Conference, which is set to take place from Friday. The conference will bring together international leaders, including US Vice President JD Vance and Ukrainian President Volodymyr Zelenskyy.

As the world grapples with the implications of the incident, one thing is clear the need for stricter security measures and a more comprehensive approach to immigration has never been more pressing.

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