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Addressing Teen Pregnancy DSWD's ProtecTEEN Initiative Boosts Counseling Efforts

The Department of Social Welfare and Development (DSWD) has launched a comprehensive program, ProtecTEEN, to address the growing incidence of adolescent pregnancies in the Philippines. This initiative is designed to provide psychosocial interventions for teenage mothers and their families, with a focus on counseling and empowerment.

A Growing Concern Teen Pregnancies on the Rise

According to a report by the Commission on Population and Development (CPD), there were 142,276 adolescent mothers who gave birth in the Philippines in 2023. Although this number is lower than the previous year's figure of 150,148, the CPD has sounded an alarm over the increasing trend of very young adolescent mothers under the age of 15.

An Alarming Increase Under-15-Year-Old Mothers

In 2019, there were only 2,411 under-15-year-olds who gave birth. However, in just four years, this number has more than doubled to 3,343 pregnancies in 2023. This trend is unacceptable and requires immediate attention.

ProtecTEEN Initiative A Menu of Services

In response to the growing incidence of adolescent pregnancies, the DSWD piloted-tested the ProtecTEEN program in Malaybalay, Bukidnon, and Antipolo City from 2022 to 2023. This initiative provides a menu of services designed to address the complex challenges faced by adolescent mothers. The program focuses on counseling, psychosocial support, and empowerment.

National Expansion Serving Over 870 Adolescent Mothers

In 2024, the DSWD expanded the ProtecTEEN program nationwide, serving over 870 adolescent mothers so far. Assistant Secretary Irene Dumlao emphasized the importance of this initiative The main goal of ProtecTEEN is to protect and promote the rights and well-being of adolescent mothers, their spouses or partners, and their families... to further empower them in their civic efficiency as part of nation-building and development.

Addressing Underlying Factors

ProtecTEEN's focus on addressing the underlying factors that contribute to adolescent pregnancies is crucial. The program provides counseling services and psychosocial support to assist these young mothers in overcoming their current situation and becoming productive members of society.

A National Priority Implementing Executive Order 141

The DSWD is complying with Executive Order 141, series of 2021, which deems the implementation of measures to address the growing incidence of adolescent pregnancies a national priority. The ProtecTEEN initiative is a critical step towards achieving this goal.

Conclusion Empowering Adolescent Mothers

In conclusion, the DSWD's ProtecTEEN initiative is a vital effort to address the rising trend of teen pregnancies in the Philippines. By providing counseling services and psychosocial support, the program aims to empower adolescent mothers and their families to overcome the challenges they face, ultimately contributing to nation-building and development.

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