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The Freeze A Threat to Millions in Latin America - USAID's Dismantling Leaves Communities Paralyzed

The recent freeze on development aid by President Donald Trump's administration has left numerous programs in Latin America paralyzed, affecting millions of people. The US Agency for International Development (USAID), responsible for delivering critical health and emergency services, is at the forefront of this crisis.

A Billion-Dollar Impact

According to Foreignassistance.gov, USAID disbursed approximately $1.7 billion in Latin America and the Caribbean in 2023. This funding supported a range of initiatives, including those led by non-governmental organizations (NGOs), public entities, and life-saving United Nations programs. Without this aid, experts warn that there will be many layoffs and many communities will be affected, said Juana Garcia Duque, an international cooperation expert at the University of the Andes in Bogota.

Colombia's Greatest Beneficiary

Colombia, a country grappling with drug trafficking and related violence, has been the primary beneficiary of USAID funds. In 2023, nearly a quarter of these funds were allocated to Colombia, primarily to support the implementation of a 2016 peace agreement that saw the FARC guerrilla group disarm. Notably, USAID funding represented less than one percent of Colombia's GDP.

Central America A Different Story

In Central American countries, the situation is more complex because a significant portion of their economies depends on external resources. In Peru, NGOs will be forced to restrict projects if support is withdrawn. In Guatemala, Lambda LGBTQ+ has already suspended its sexual health education project, highlighting the devastating impact of the freeze.

A Threat to Humanitarian Efforts

The freeze also poses a significant threat to life-saving programs in countries like Colombia and Haiti. In the Colombian Amazon, deforestation, drug trafficking, and illegal mining are likely to increase if funding is lost. Young people who rely on these programs would be left without prospects, potentially driving them into the arms of criminal organizations.

A Humanitarian Crisis

The Entre Dos Tierras foundation in Bucaramanga, Colombia, has already been forced to close its doors due to the freeze. This organization employed 16 people and distributed nearly 600 free meals daily, leaving a significant number of individuals without support. Everything is paralyzed, said Alba Pereira, the foundation's director.

US Priorities

Analysts suggest that the aid freeze may ultimately undermine Trump's main goals of stopping the flow of illicit drugs and undocumented people into the United States. The freeze could also tilt the region towards donors like China, a geopolitical rival whose growing influence in Latin America Washington is eager to counter.

Conclusion

As USAID's dismantling takes effect, millions of people are left without hope. It is crucial that alternative solutions be found to support life-saving programs and communities. While USAID has not been uncontroversial in the region, its withdrawal could have far-reaching consequences for humanitarian efforts and regional stability.

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