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Austria Celebrates 200 Years of 'Waltz King' Johann Strauss II The Man Behind the Music

As Austria commemorates the bicentenary of its beloved waltz king, Johann Strauss II, it's clear that his music has lost none of its timeless allure. Born in 1825, Strauss was a master composer who left an indelible mark on the world of classical music.

The Blue Danube and Beyond

While he is most renowned for his iconic waltz The Blue Danube, which has become Austria's unofficial national anthem, many of his 500 dance pieces continue to delight audiences in Vienna during the city's bustling ball season. Strauss's enduring popularity stems from his ability to craft catchy tunes that bring people joy, as noted by his great-grand-nephew, Eduard Strauss.

Marketing the Star

But Strauss's fame wasn't solely due to his hit compositions. In an era when selling music meant marketing the star himself, Strauss was a pioneer in self-promotion. One could say that he was actually the first pop star in the modern sense, observed Clara Kaufmann, a museum guide at the Strauss Museum.

Vienna Celebrates

To commemorate this milestone anniversary, Vienna is hosting special events, concerts, and exhibitions, as well as adorning an Austrian Airlines airplane with a portrait of Strauss and his violin. As British dentist Helen Foster noted during her visit to one of Vienna's Strauss museums, Strauss symbolizes music for all. His appealing waltz melodies have been a source of joy for people across the ages.

From Humble Beginnings

Born in the suburbs of Vienna into a family of renowned musicians, Strauss faced challenges early on. Despite his father's wishes that he not follow in his footsteps, Strauss secretly took violin lessons with the support of his mother.

Impressive Stage Shows

After his father abandoned the family for another woman, Strauss's mother Anna became instrumental in shaping her eldest son's career. He made his debut at 18, becoming a direct rival to his father. By refining and elevating his father's simpler waltzes into refined concert works, Strauss created a unique sound that captivated audiences.

Off-Stage

Contrary to the public persona of a womanizer, Strauss struggled with insecurities and self-doubt in private. His great-grand-nephew noted that he had many phobias, including travel phobia, and had difficulties with women. He was a mama's boy.

Legacy

In 1866, Strauss penned what is arguably the world's most famous waltz, The Blue Danube, which has been featured in Vienna's prestigious New Year's concert every year since its inception. Although he disliked traveling, Strauss regularly toured across Europe, entertaining Russian nobility for over a decade. In 1872, he headlined the World's Peace Jubilee in Boston, a two-week music festival attended by tens of thousands.

A Lasting Legacy

As musicologist Thomas Aigner noted about Strauss's enduring legacy, People still dance to Strauss waltzes, but you can also hear them in concert halls, and that was his special achievement. The revered composer passed away in 1899, leaving behind a rich musical heritage that continues to captivate audiences around the world.

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