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Pope Francis' Condition A Complex Clinical Picture Requires Extended Hospitalization

Rome - Pope Francis has been hospitalized for several days, with his condition described as a complex clinical picture that will require a longer-than-expected stay. The 88-year-old pontiff was admitted to Rome's Gemelli Hospital on Friday with bronchitis, the latest in a series of health issues he has faced in recent years.

According to a Vatican statement released earlier today, tests have confirmed a polymicrobial infection of the respiratory tract that has led to a change in treatment. The complex clinical picture will require adequate hospitalization, the statement added.

In an update this evening, the Vatican reported that Pope Francis' condition remains unchanged; he is fever-free and continuing with his unspecified treatment. Today, he received the Eucharist and dedicated some time to reading texts.

Pope Francis has been touched by the numerous messages of affection and closeness he has received during his hospitalization, the update noted. His weekly Wednesday audience has been canceled, as well as events previously scheduled through Monday.

Vatican spokesman Matteo Bruni reported that Pope Francis is in good humor, having rested well overnight, eaten breakfast, and read the newspapers. A source close to the pope described him as being in good spirits, with no alarm within the Vatican.

However, concerns have been raised about the Argentine pontiff's health, particularly given his history of respiratory infections. In the days leading up to his hospitalization, Pope Francis had admitted to difficulty breathing and asked aides to read speeches aloud on his behalf.

This is not the first time Pope Francis has faced health issues. He underwent surgery in 2021 for diverticulitis and had part of one lung removed as a young man. In recent years, he has experienced recurring respiratory infections, including bronchitis last year and again this week.

Despite these challenges, Pope Francis remains an active pontiff. Last September, he completed a four-nation Asia-Pacific tour, the longest of his papacy by duration and distance. He has also maintained a packed schedule, including daily private audiences, weekly Angelus prayers on Sundays, and public audiences on Wednesdays.

In his written address for Sunday's Angelus prayer, Pope Francis thanked those who had sent him messages of support from hospital bed. I would have liked to be among you, he wrote, but as you know, I am here at the Gemelli Hospital because I still need some treatment for my bronchitis.

This complex clinical picture is a reminder that even world leaders are not immune to health challenges. As Pope Francis continues his recovery, the global community will continue to send its best wishes for his full and speedy recovery.

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