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The Future of VP's in Balance Navigating the Complexities of Senate Impeachment

As Activist Designers, we're well-versed in navigating complex systems and their far-reaching impacts. In this blog post, we'll delve into the intricacies of the upcoming Philippine Senate election, where Vice President Sara Duterte's fate hangs precariously in the balance.

Impeachment Trial A Critical Moment

On [date], the House of Representatives impeached Vice President Sara Duterte on charges of violation of the constitution, betrayal of public trust, graft and corruption, and other high crimes. This sets the stage for a crucial Senate trial that will determine her fate – including any future presidential ambitions. With 16 votes required to convict, the composition of the next Senate becomes increasingly important.

The Duterte Camp's Message Choosing Wisely

The Vice President's camp has urged voters to choose wisely in the upcoming election, emphasizing the importance of selecting representatives who will shape her political future. This message resonates deeply with some Filipinos, such as Gina Tamayo, a 43-year-old fruit vendor, who will only support candidates who don't intend to vote against Duterte.

Electioneering A Double-Edged Sword

As campaigns kick off, colorful posters and catchy jingles will fill the airwaves. However, beneath the surface lies a darker reality – violence and intimidation. Police are investigating 12 incidents of election-related violence, including the tragic death of a candidate. With control over local purse strings at stake, even low-level offices can become battlegrounds.

A Popularity Contest Where Does it Leave VP Duterte?

Recent surveys by Social Weather Stations have listed job creation, food security, health system, education, and workers' rights as top concerns for Filipinos. However, the contest for Senate seats often boils down to name recognition – something polls suggest will continue. With high-profile candidates like Erwin Tulfo and Manny Pacquiao vying for seats, the stage is set for an unpredictable ride.

Conclusion A Call to Action

As Activist Designers, we recognize the power of design in shaping our world. As the Philippines heads into this critical election season, it's essential that we acknowledge the complexities at play. By understanding the stakes and weighing the options, we can work towards a brighter future for all Filipinos.

Takeaway Points

• The impeachment trial of Vice President Sara Duterte is set to take place in the Senate.
• 16 votes are required to convict, making the composition of the next Senate crucial.
• Electioneering has become increasingly violent, with 12 incidents reported and more expected.
• Popularity contests often dominate election seasons, but it's essential to consider more than just name recognition.

What Can You Do?

Take a moment to reflect on the complexities surrounding this election. Consider how you can use your design skills to create positive change in your community. Share this blog post with fellow designers and encourage them to get involved in the conversation.

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