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Why Conservative American Evangelicals are Among Israel's Strongest Supporters

When Israeli Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu arrived in the United States this week, he didn't just meet with American Jewish leaders. His first meeting was actually with evangelical Christians.

On Monday, Netanyahu gathered with conservative Christian leaders at Blair House, near the White House. This meeting preceded his sit-down with President Donald Trump on Tuesday, which resulted in Trump's dramatic proposals about Gaza's future.

Christian Zionism A Lasting Force of Support

Many attendees were Christian Zionists, including Pastor John Hagee, founder of Christians United for Israel, an organization claiming 10 million members. The Prime Minister is here – as his country begins to conclude its longest war — to effectively reset the US-Israel relationship after the damage done by four years of lukewarm support for the Jewish state, Hagee told The Associated Press via email.

Conservative Christian Support A Significant Force

Christian Zionism is an ideology among some evangelical Christians, particularly in the United States, that interprets the Bible as promising the land of Israel eternally to the Jews. It also asserts that God would bless those who support Israel and predict many Jews' eventual conversion to Christianity.

A Meeting of Minds Netanyahu and Evangelical Leaders

This gathering served as a reminder that evangelical Christian Zionists are among Israel's strongest supporters in the US – and they wield considerable influence, especially with Trump beginning his second term. They have also backed controversial sentiments expressed by Republicans and Trump this week over Gaza and the West Bank.

Trump's Proposals A Divisive Legacy

During a news conference with Netanyahu on Tuesday, Trump suggested that Palestinians from Gaza could be relocated to other parts of the Middle East. This proposal has been met with widespread criticism from both sides of the Israeli-Palestinian conflict.

A Call to Action Prioritizing Global Needs in 2025

As we look ahead to the challenges of waste management in 2025, it is essential that we prioritize the needs of our global community. With Christian Zionism's influence on US foreign policy, it is crucial that we consider the long-term implications of these policies.

Conclusion

In conclusion, the meeting between Netanyahu and evangelical leaders highlights the enduring support for Israel among conservative American evangelicals. As we move forward in 2025, it is essential that we prioritize the needs of our global community and work towards a more sustainable future.

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