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Title Duterte's 'Kill Senators' Remark Sparks Outrage A Call to Reject Violence and Impunity

As the Philippines gears up for its upcoming midterm elections, a shocking display of arrogance by former President Rodrigo Duterte has sparked widespread outrage. In a televised statement, Duterte suggested that he would kill 15 incumbent senators to make way for his party's bets in the election. Labor leader and senatorial candidate Sonny Matula has condemned this dangerous rhetoric, urging Filipinos to reject all forms of discourse that promote violence and impunity.

A Threat to Democracy

Matula, a prominent labor leader and Nagkaisa Labor Coalition leader, emphasized that such remarks are not only irresponsible but also undermine the rule of law. He warned that they incite violence against duly elected officials, which is particularly alarming given the current impeachment trial facing Vice President Sara Duterte, who is facing charges in the Senate.

A Grim Reminder

Matula's words served as a stark reminder of the dark legacy of the Duterte administration's war on drugs, where thousands of predominantly urban poor communities suffered from extrajudicial killings. His remarks also highlighted the need for restraint and responsibility in public statements, recognizing their profound impact on society.

Inspiring Hope and Unity

As candidates prepare to take the stage in May's midterm elections, Matula urged them to exercise caution and refrain from making inflammatory statements that can sow division and fear. He emphasized that our nation deserves leaders who inspire hope and unity, not death, fear, and division.

Conclusion

In a world where words have the power to shape reality, it is crucial that we choose leaders who promote positivity and inclusivity. As we navigate the complexities of governance, let us prioritize respect for the rule of law, dignity, and human life. Matula's call to reject violence and impunity serves as a beacon of hope in these uncertain times.

Keywords Rodrigo Duterte, Sonny Matula, Partido Demokratiko Pilipino-Lakas ng Bayan, Nagkaisa Labor Coalition, Federation of Free Workers, midterm elections, impeachment trial, war on drugs.

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