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Marcos' Senate Slate All Set for 2025 Polls

The administration of President Ferdinand Marcos Jr. has announced that its powerhouse Senate slate, under the banner of Alyansa para sa Bagong Pilipinas (Alliance for a New Philippines), is ready to launch its campaign for the May 2025 midterm elections. According to Campaign Manager Navotas City Rep. Toby Tiangco, the administration's senatorial candidates will embark on a nationwide tour, with President Marcos Jr. and the senatorial hopefuls attending 21 sorties across the country.

A Grassroots-Focused Approach

The campaign will focus on grassroots-driven initiatives, emphasizing the importance of unity and transformation in building a stronger and more progressive nation. Tiangco emphasized that the aim is to rally Filipinos behind a Senate that works in tandem with the President to achieve these goals.

Handpicked by the President

President Marcos Jr. personally selected Tiangco to lead the campaign, recognizing his experience as a local leader with a track record of delivering results. This choice underscores the importance of a campaign that not only seeks to win votes but also defines the nation's path forward.

A New Philippines

Tiangco emphasized that this campaign is about more than just politics it's about creating a Bagong Pilipinas, a new Philippines that every Filipino can see, feel, and take pride in. This vision resonates with President Marcos Jr.'s call for unity and transformation.

Confidence from the President

In a recent statement, President Marcos expressed confidence that the administration-backed candidates would secure all 12 senatorial seats up for grabs in the midterm polls.

The Ticket

The administration's Senate slate includes seasoned politicians and public servants such as Senate Majority Leader Francis Tolentino, former interior secretary Benjamin Abalos Jr., former senator Manny Pacquiao, Makati Mayor Abigail Binay, Sen. Pia Cayetano, former senator Panfilo Lacson, Sen. Lito Lapid, Sen. Imee Marcos, Sen. Ramon Revilla Jr., former Senate president Vicente Sotto, ACT-CIS party-list Rep. Erwin Tulfo, and Las Piñas Rep. Camille Villar.

A Strong Party

President Marcos also assured the administration's candidates that his own political party, Partido Federal ng Pilipinas (PFP), will do everything in its power to help them secure their victory in the midterm polls. The PFP has assembled a strong team of public servants and politicians under its umbrella, ensuring a united front in the 2025 elections.

With its powerhouse Senate slate, grassroots-driven approach, and commitment to unity and transformation, the administration is poised to make a significant impact in the 2025 polls.

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