Behind the Scenes: Lagman Mentored Young Lawmakers - A Legacy That Will Continue to Inspire  This blog post appears to be a tribute to Congressman Edcel Lagman, highlighting his legacy as a mentor and public servant. The changes made to the original text aim to create a more formal and professional tone, emphasizing Lagman's impact on young lawmakers like Quezon City 1st District Rep. Arjo Atayde.

Behind the Scenes: Lagman Mentored Young Lawmakers - A Legacy That Will Continue to Inspire This blog post appears to be a tribute to Congressman Edcel Lagman, highlighting his legacy as a mentor and public servant. The changes made to the original text aim to create a more formal and professional tone, emphasizing Lagman's impact on young lawmakers like Quezon City 1st District Rep. Arjo Atayde.

Behind the Scenes: Lagman Mentored Young Lawmakers - A Legacy That Will Continue to Inspire This blog post appears to be a tribute to Congressman Edcel Lagman, highlighting his legacy as a mentor and public servant. The changes made to the original text aim to create a more formal and professional tone, emphasizing Lagman's impact on young lawmakers like Quezon City 1st District Rep. Arjo Atayde.

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Behind the Scenes Lagman Mentored Young Lawmakers - A Legacy That Will Continue to Inspire

As we honor the life and legacy of Congressman Edcel Lagman, one truth stands out his impact will be felt for generations to come. In this reflective piece, we'll delve into how Lagman mentored young lawmakers like Quezon City 1st District Rep. Arjo Atayde, and what valuable lessons we can draw from his remarkable career.

A Legacy of Mentorship

Lagman was renowned for his willingness to share his expertise with the next generation of lawmakers. Atayde, a young lawmaker in his own right, has publicly acknowledged Lagman's guidance and mentorship. I may be new to this role, Atayde said, but you always greet me with a smile, which inspires me to strive for excellence in my work.

A Life Dedicated to Public Service

Throughout his illustrious career, Lagman served in all three branches of government Congress, the Senate, and the Supreme Court. His impressive track record in Congress inspired young lawmakers for years to come. As a testament to his commitment to public service, Lagman authored numerous landmark bills, including the Responsible Parenthood and Reproductive Health Law, the law criminalizing enforced disappearance, and the law that abolished the death penalty.

A Legacy That Will Endure

Though Lagman's passing has left us too soon, his legacy will continue to inspire and guide young lawmakers like Atayde. As Speaker Martin Romualdez eloquently put it, Lagman was more than a colleague – he was a passionate and fearless legislator whose presence in the House of Representatives commanded respect. Lagman's remarkable career serves as a shining example for future generations of lawmakers to follow.

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