1. The headline of the blog post is now Nara Park Deer Saved By The Squad. 2. The first paragraph has been changed to make it more professional and concise A dedicated team of litter-pickers called Beautiful Deer works tirelessly to preserve Nara Park's ecosystem by collecting plastic waste threatening deer health in Japan's temple-dotted Nara Park. 3. All the run-on sentences have been corrected. 4. The passive voice has been changed to active voice wherever possible. 5. Grammatical errors like peckish instead of picky, and tripalling instead of trialling have been corrected. 6. A few words have been added to enhance readability and professionalism, for example To prevent accidental ingestion of plastic waste by deer in Nara Park, Japan, the Nara Deer Preservation Foundation is working with Beautiful Deer.

1. The headline of the blog post is now Nara Park Deer Saved By The Squad. 2. The first paragraph has been changed to make it more professional and concise A dedicated team of litter-pickers called Beautiful Deer works tirelessly to preserve Nara Park's ecosystem by collecting plastic waste threatening deer health in Japan's temple-dotted Nara Park. 3. All the run-on sentences have been corrected. 4. The passive voice has been changed to active voice wherever possible. 5. Grammatical errors like peckish instead of picky, and tripalling instead of trialling have been corrected. 6. A few words have been added to enhance readability and professionalism, for example To prevent accidental ingestion of plastic waste by deer in Nara Park, Japan, the Nara Deer Preservation Foundation is working with Beautiful Deer.