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Pope Francis Returns Home After 5-Week Hospital Stay A Jubilant Moment for the Vatican

After a five-week hospital stay, Pope Francis has finally returned to his home at the Vatican. The 88-year-old Pontiff was admitted to Gemelli hospital on February 14 due to a severe respiratory tract infection, which worsened into bronchitis and eventually pneumonia in both lungs.

Francis's hospitalization was marked by two life-threatening crises, including an acute coughing fit and the need for manual aspiration of mucus from his lungs. Despite these challenges, the Pope remained alert and cooperative throughout his treatment.

Upon his release, Francis expressed gratitude to the medical team that cared for him, stating I'm still alive! Dr. Luigi Carbone, the Vatican's chief doctor, confirmed that the Pope will require two months of rest and convalescence to fully recover from his illness.

The Pope's return home is a significant milestone in his recovery and brings relief to the Vatican and Catholics worldwide. As he settles into his routine at Domus Santa Marta, Francis will have access to supplemental oxygen and 24-hour medical care as needed.

While Pope Francis was away, the number of pilgrims expected for Holy Year celebrations in Rome remained unaffected. In fact, Francis is already looking forward to participating in Easter services later this month, and there are hopes that he may be well enough to travel to Turkey at the end of May to mark an important ecumenical anniversary.

The Vatican's spokesman, Matteo Bruni, declined to confirm any upcoming events, including a scheduled audience with King Charles III. However, Dr. Carbone expressed optimism that Francis will make a full recovery and return to his normal activities soon.

As Pope Francis begins this new chapter in his life, the world is reminded of the importance of faith, perseverance, and the power of prayer.

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